We were learning about How we can do our dad slide.
I found it easy to To write down facts about my dad.
I found it hard to Get a photo of me and dad so I got one off the web.
I really enjoyed How I could actually created my dad slide.
My top tip from doing this work On how I can use more words that express dad.
Next time I need to Do more words that describe him.
My Blog Post shows I am Stepping Up.
Monday, 24 September 2018
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hi I'm Tui I like how you put a lot of information into your post. Maybe you could work on the colours in your post, i liked how you added how he gets hurt and he's so helpful.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Tui for your nice comment
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